Writer’s Wednesday: Describe the Positive Instead of the Negative

Lesson #7: Describe the positive instead of the negative. What does this mean?

In other words, you should state what something is rather than what it isn’t.

Instead of using negative comparisons, use positive.  Your reader is focusing on the root words in your description, and his brain is having to go the extra effort to turn your meaning around inside his head. Why not make it easy in the first place?

For example, instead of saying, “The new car was inexpensive. We got a great deal!”– Say, “The new car was economical. We got a great deal!”

Instead of describing a character’s body build as “almost pudgy,” call him “chubby.” Instead of saying a character “didn’t flinch,” say he “remained still.”

Positive instead of negative.

Your job as a writer is to do anything and everything to make your readers work less hard to get the meaning of your prose.

Happy writing!

Lookin’ up,




BIG DEAL–My Piece is Running on Rachelle Gardner’s Blog Today!

This is a BIG DEAL. . . . Rachelle is one of those agents you secretly wish would clamor to sign you up as a client and rep your new book.

Last year at the ACFW conference in St. Louis, I walked within 3 feet of her (it was a crowded hallway) and went, “WOW! That’s Rachelle Gardner!” Thank the Lord, I had enough wits about me not to barge into her tight conversation with another agent to introduce myself, and say oh, by the way, I have this book I’m writing about. . . . Else, she might have remembered me. LOL.

So. . . if you’re interested, here’s the link: http://www.rachellegardner.com/2012/08/hiring-a-blog-designer/

Disclaimer:  This piece is a compilation of a 3-post series I posted earlier this year about blogsite design, so if the topic is not something you’re interested in reading again, I TOTALLY understand.

**But, please just stop by and SEE IT, if you would! THIS IS A BIG DEAL!

To God be the glory!!

Lookin’ up,




Writer’s Wednesday: The Long and Short of It

Somewhere along the way, I’m sure you heard the adage, “Vary the lengths of your sentences.”

Good advice, that. It holds true for sentences, paragraphs, chapters — any arbitrary stopping point in writing.

Why?  Because it takes conscientious manipulation of words on the page to make them visually and mentally appealing to your readers.

Here’s an analogy. If you were driving down a country road, a highway surrounded on either side with identical trees and bushes, with the same unchanging flat landscape, with no other interruptions to greet you or pass by in a very long while, what would your mind begin to do?

That’s right. Your attention would drift. Your brain would fatigue. Because the monotony of what’s ahead is just too boring to stay engaged. (Did you notice how your mind reacted to the L-O-N-G sentence above?)

I’ll go further.  Lesson #4: Long sentences/paragraphs/chapters require much more effort to read. so be wary of using them. Especially of placing one after another, after another.

There are exceptions, of course.  If you write complicated thoughts needing explanation and the format you’re using is one of a technical nature, then long sentences/paragraphs/chapters may make perfect sense for you. By all means, employ those long sentences.

Or if you write fiction and you wish to lull your reader into a deadly stupor before you interject some excitement in your story, then go for it. This is a plotting technique known as pacing.

However, if you are writing a general blog post, or an article on a more mundane level, you’re better off with this next suggestion. Lesson #5: Keep a goodly portion of sentences/paragraphs/chapters short and your reader will appreciate it.

Hands down, two clear short sentences beat a long, unwieldy one every time. (Not that you can’t slip a long one in there every so often, just to mix things up!)

In the same vein, look for logical places to break up those long blocks of black text. Bust it up! Shorter paragraphs translate into more “white space,” which is easier on the eye. Give your readers plenty of white space (within reason), and they’ll love you for it.

Next week, Lesson #6: Two adjectives are not better than one.

Happy writing!

Lookin’ up,